Saturday, October 4, 2008

taglines

Edge
Rescue, re-educate, re-introduce

Spring
Destination Get-Away

4 comments:

Ryan said...

Edge: this is pretty good, but not totally resolved. Needs more actionable ideas that relate to the intensity of the situation.

Spring: How about focusing on the idea of getaway?

Nathalie said...

rescue, re-evaluate, restore

For Edge, is this any better?

For Spring,
Luxury Escape
Luxury Getaway
Escape to Paradise

I though I would target women like 35-50 who have families and want to get away (or just dream about getting away) with their girlfriends

Nathalie said...

Ok... Spring - Love the Destination

Redirecting... targeting married men and women looking for family or couples getaways, age like 35-50

Andrew said...

Edge:
good options here.. You're almost there but I think you need the word "action" in there somewhere.. something that talks about THINKING (re-evaluate), ACTING, and CHANGING the situation (restoring).

Spring:
I like that you broadened your scope by focusing on family/couple getaways and I think you're circling what you're trying to get at (like a pack of wolves or maybe a shark).. to me, Spring implies movement and change and I think you're focusing on the change aspect of the word with "destination". Try to incorporate the CHANGE aspect into your tagline as well. Let me know if this is too vague.