Thursday, December 18, 2008

Petpeeves revision









Ok.  Here are my Pet peeves revised.  I got rid of the elevator one.  I replaced it with a different one, but I wanted to know what people thought, because I have been looking at these too long.  How does the new one read?  Does it read like an annoying pencil with hardly any eraser? Or I was thinking, if this doesn't read well, to flip the pencil around and have the lead broken.  

Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Refined

What about this...

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!

Thanks!

Monday, December 15, 2008

Book spreads

Been working on my spreads, a little feedback before I print would be great.

There are 2 versions of spread 2 because I don't really know what to do with it.

Thanks

-Edit- Added my cover to this

Cleaver pictogram


I found this ad while looking for some reference for my pictogram. It's some ad from German hat company that I thought nice, and really relates to what we are doing right now [or at least what I'm trying to do]. Isn't it really cleaver how they used simple difference in icon to communicate the importance of hat.

Sunday, December 14, 2008

Kailie's New Pictograms

new pictograms

I changed from places to activity. I make a "healthy" shake everyday so I decided to show the process through my pictograms. I have 6. I'm thinking about getting rid of the first one or just having an empty cup without the milk carton? What do you guys think? Any suggestions?

Paul Rand UPS Logo for Kallie's reference


This is a great, simple graphic representation of a knot. We know all we need to know based on a few lines.

Friday, December 12, 2008

Pet-Peeves Revised






I revised all my pictograms here, and I am still going to investigate redoing the elevator one and switching it with a different pet-peeve, but I was just wondering if anybody had anything to say.  Thanks

pictogram changes


here are the changes to everything except honeybear...

Thursday, December 11, 2008

Pet-Peeves....

OK. I don't know why these things have lines through them.  But they really are solid images.  All three I feel I am still trying to make cohesive with my next two, but I am having a bit of trouble.  So, please let me know how people react.  Thanks.





Pictograms #2



All 5!  made changes to the car.
Tanks for the input last time!

New vs. old



Old mouth on top. New mouth on bottom.

Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Pictogram progress Part 2


okay, well how do we feel about these?

pictogram progress


so these are what I have thus far. I'm pretty happy with them. any questions, just ask!

Pictograms


Pictograms thus far.  Still working out the other 2.  Feedback would be great, Thanks!

Teeth

Hii, this is what I have so far. Need to know if these are too illustrative, or if they rule!



Thankyyy

Tuesday, December 9, 2008

pictograms


here are the beginnings of my pictograms. Any feedback would be great.

Thanks.