Tuesday, October 7, 2008

tagline

Link:

"All that matters in Baltimore"


Edge:

"Brining neue to now"

2 comments:

Ryan said...

Link: Sounds newsy. Does this have the right voice for your concept? It clearly says what it is, but is it in the right tone?

Edge: I like this. Could you trim it even more? "Neue. Now."?

Ryan

Andrew said...

Link:
It has the nyt tone to it.. "all the news fit to print". Be more specific.. look at your topic for inspiration

Edge:
I like yours but like Ryan's even better. You could also do some nice type treatment with Neue.Now