Wednesday, November 12, 2008

New Poster



2 comments:

harmstro said...

This is working well with the poster as the card. My only comment is that the second line on the poster could be a little more direct. Maybe something like "Don't let politicians raid social security." or "Don't be left holding the bag." or something to that effect. It isn't really that important to know the exact date that social security will be gone. Just instill a sense of urgency in your audience with a simple direct statement.

Ryan said...

This is more successful. The horizontal aspect solves some of the issues that were problematic before.

Colors seem to work ok. Look at your hierarchy and make sure it's clear what is your headline and what is the call to action.

Also, be careful that the white negative spaces that you created to hold the type don't have too much visual emphasis and make it feel like something is missing or cut away.

- Ryan