Wednesday, November 12, 2008

3rd Time's a Charm?...



Soooo.  Here I am again posting a 3rd version.  I centered the image and the text after trying it many different ways, mainly because the image has to be in the poster.  I know that centering is sometimes dangerous, but in this case I think it works.  Again, thanks for your replies.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice blog. road to richies.

Ryan said...

Kallie: Centered text is not quite working...still a little off on the hierarchy, but this is tightening up.

Call to action: maybe instead of "youth vote counts" it's "every", "your' or maybe even better "my".

My vote counts....

Puts it back into the same voice as the narrative that is established.

- Ryan

harmstro said...

I agree that the centered type isn't working. Centered type feels too traditional for the voice you are trying to capture. Ryan's call to action edit is a good one.