Monday, October 6, 2008

Spring: Helping new life grow

Point: Get to it

2 comments:

Ryan said...

Spring: I like the idea of new life, but it's a little wordy right now. Is it for new life, or is it for parents? I'd target them more.

Point: This is good.

Ryan

Andrew said...

spring:
the parent idea is novel and I think plants when I read your tagline.. find some way to incorporate people more directly

point:
succinct and to the point.. good job!