Tuesday, October 7, 2008

charde taglines

Link: Your Voice, Your World

Crop:Thinking outside the four corners or box

3 comments:

Ryan said...

Link: This is great.

Crop: Outside the box is a cliche, and not as elegant as your magazine concept. What does it mean to think outside the box? It's similar to "lateral thinking"...Give this another go, or take the box part right out. "thinking outside", "thinking out loud", push this a bit more.

Ryan

Andrew said...
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Andrew said...

link:
good job!

crop:
Ryan makes some good points and suggestions here. Try substituting "thinking" with other words too.. like "making", "shooting", etc.. there are lots of words that could apply. Check out an online thesaurus for ideas: http://thesaurus.reference.com/