Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Shannon's Poster

Shannon's poster for comments.

2 comments:

harmstro said...

Your concept is strong. Your headline needs to be stronger and more direct, though. Right now it is getting lost in the layout. Your imagery is a little oblique, which works well. But your text needs to offset that by being very direct and straightforward. In other words, the reader has to work a little to figure out the image so they shouldn't have too work so much to understand the text. Come up with a strong direct statement and then give it more visual weight on the page.

Ryan said...

Shannon: Yes, your headline and call to action are unclear, and in terms of hierarchy are at the exact same level of significance. Set one as the focal point, and refine your statement. It's still unclear what your message is, and asking the viewer to fill in the answer is stretching their level of participation.

Image works well.