Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Pictogram progress Part 2


okay, well how do we feel about these?

3 comments:

Kallie Sternburgh said...

Claire,
I like the various glasses and cups, but is there any way that you could reconsider the two teabag ones? I am a little confused as to how all the five different pictograms seem to have different drinks, but then the top two both have tea?????

Claire said...

the reason that there are two cups with tea, is because I usually drink two cups of tea a day. Staying true to my routine, I have decided to keep 2 cups of tea, instead of changing one. Do you think that it would be better if I changed one of the cups of tea to a cup of coffee and had, say, steam rising from the coffee cup? would that be annoying, or would that eliminate the problem to two cups with tea bags?

Ryan said...

It would avoid the problem to have 2 cups, one with tea, one with coffee.

The only argument for having 2 tea cups is if you made the idea of a timeline of your day as your starting point, and those came in at different points. Otherwise, I'd go with coffee.

In terms of your design, these are improved. Your line weights still need to be addressed, esp in the top right glass, but these are working better.

Audit and edit your linework. Some of them still feel very choppy. If you want to play up geometry, that's a good thing to explore, just be consistent. Otherwise, make sure your curves are smooth and gorgeous.

Also, I'd have the straw go into the cup, and be cropped by where the forward edge of the cup would be.